Jenny whines about the bad quality of really popular publishedfanfiction

Saw this post on Tumblr and it is quite true.


From the extracts I've seen and the summaries I've read from 'too curious' readers:
1) there is gross depiction of BDSM themes in the book. Dominants are safe, sane and consensual and the 'dom' in the story has none of those traits but instead has traits that are linked with abusers.
2) the 'romance' and dynamics between the two main characters is highly disturbing
3) the writing is so bad. When I read an extract, which was a sex scene, I thought they were written by an average 16 year old fanfic writer so I laughed at their failed building of the atmosphere and the silly euphemisms like 'love cave'. Until I read the reference. This shit gets published and gets made into a movie??

Meanwhile, I'll just keep myself updated with Sunstone by shiniez that can be easily found on dA (chapter one). For free. It's quite enlightening on the topic of BDSM, humorous, and the characters feel real and are relatable. Also, many redheads. :D

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Day 8/11 - Kyoto, Japan

'Time to be an actual tourist' day.


I'll be using the city buses for the first time today. Yesterday, I bought a one day bus pass from the hotel for 500 yen, with a complimentary bus guide. The pass is activated with a date stamp at the back when you first use a bus, I.e. when you use the card for the first time when disembarking a bus. No need to do anything when boarding.

Anyway, I Google mapped my route to the Golden Pavilion (金閣寺) and boarded the bus, which was going away instead of towards my destination...it took me 20 minutes to realise this and change buses.

An hour later than expected, I reached my destination.

Admission fee for an adult is 400 yen.

Since I cannot enter the pavilion, here are pictures hung up nearby of its interior.


These koi fish were huge.


Next destination was Kitano Tenman-gu Shrine, which is dedicated to a person who was both a scholar and a politician. School kids would visit the shrine to pray for good examination results.

There are cows like these all over the place.

It's said that if you are to rub the cow's head, you'll become smarter. So, I found as many cows as possible and rubbed all their heads. I bought a good luck charm for studies (勧学御守) here too. May I survive next semester. I've been procrastinating in taking a particular difficult subject called Project Management and the Professional.

I visited the Udon Museum again for dinner, but with Dale and Vivian this time.

I didn't get to take a photo of my udon before I consumed it but here's a pond at the place full of koi fish. Not as big as the ones at the Golden Pavilion, but they were still bigger than the size of my hand.

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Day 7/8 - Kyoto, Japan

Today was lazy day. To feel better and justified about my (lack of activities), I went to a cat cafe and watched my fellow animals indulge in laziness.


"I'm so elegant."



Then for dinner, it was at the sushi train place (から寿司) again. This time, I took more photos.

As you can see, my favourite is the salmon and mayonnaise.


108 yen (1.24AUD), including tax, for each plate. Oh yeah.


Excuse my fingers photo bombing this. Wanted to show the capsule machines above the sushi train. If you eat enough plates, you may get a capsule. Current theme was miniature train front carriages...which I didn't take a photo of. We got a few capsules.

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Day 5/11 and Day 6/11 - Osaka, Japan

Day 5/11
Saturday, and also Universal Studios day! Harry Potter world!

I met with friends (inc. Vivian and Dale) at Saiin station in Kyoto at 8:30am, and took a few trains to get to Universal City station in Osaka. The trip was just below 2 hours.

We went through the gates at 10:50am, and aimed to get a nice time-slot ticket for Harry Potter world. Earliest time-slot turned out to be at 7pm though, so we wandered everywhere else. 

I was lucky to get Hermione on my Universal Studios ticket. Everyone else either got Harry (on or off a broomstick) or Ron.

Dale and I got to go on a 4D Back to the Future ride; I waited 100 mins in line for that. Luckily we got in before 5:30pm (at 4:30, actually) because they would change the ride to fit more with the Halloween theme that the rest of the park was having.

To kill some time, we lined up for the Jurassic Park ride that had an expected wait time of 180 mins. The line seemed to go along finely at first; we shuffled forward every few minutes or so until 5:30pm. The line stopped for 20-30 minutes. Then artificial thunder and lightening happened nearby, most of the lights blacked out and school girls screamed. Japan.

At 6:50, we gave up waiting and went on our way to enter Harry Potter world.



What a wonderful world. 

Dale had already gone on the ride so he accompanied a friend who only wanted to see the interior of the castle, whilst Vivian and I lined up for the 4D ride that's also in the castle.

The ride was awesome. The wait was 100 mins or so here too. We didn't need to pay extra for the lockers as they provided us those. Also, there were huge spiders on this ride. The smallest spider was the size of your face, and some of them move up and down on its web. Luckily, Dale had prepped me about them so I didn't wet my pants. I think my fear of spiders has lowered actually, due to this ride and the preparation. Yay.

Anyway, before we got on the actual ride, we climbed up static stairs (thank goodness, I would trip if they moved) AND THE PAINTINGS ON THE WALLS MOVED AND TALKED AND IT WAS DONE VERY CONVINCINGLY. Oh, and they were understandably dubbed over in Japanese. Japanese Ron sounded funny at first hear. My British voices...where art thou?

After the ride, we went to get our robes. Luckily the ones we wanted (Gryffindor and Slytherin) were still in stock. When I got there, there were 2 Gryffindor robes left. After I got my robe, there were 3 left... A few people were taking the robes off the hook, putting them on, and taking selfies before putting the robes back on the hook.

I also got a wand that's a replica of Hermione's. It's so elegant~




Left Universal Studios at 9ish. Because I wanted to visit the Pokemon Centre that's also in Osaka the next day, stayed at a hotel in Osaka instead of returning to Kyoto.

I had late dinner of okonomiyaki and takoyaki! The two foods Osaka is well known for.


Day 6/11
Pokemon! Gotta catch 'em all!


There were also capsule machines, my latest addiction.


Got these pins from them. These pins are apparently exclusive to Pokemon centres.


Then I returned to Kyoto and got this lovely custard pancake at Hoshino Coffee. There's usually a wait list to get in. It was only a 5 minute wait though, for 3 people at around 2:30pm on a Sunday. 


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Day 4/11 - Kyoto, Japan

Karaoke night. I forgot to take pictures.


Went to Nishiki Markets earlier in the day. Also forgot to take pictures then. Maybe will go back to Nishiki Markets later, eat more and take more snaps.

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